Good Writers (My Class)

My teacher loves when we write. She says that you are never done with your stories. If you go up to her and say you are done with your story, she will say, "No you are not. Go check over it." In my stories I love to draw pictures to help people know what I'm writing about. My teacher wants us to look for boring words and change them to exciting words. For example, you can change "happy" to "joyful." Or, you can change "cold" to "chilly." You can change "friend" to "soul mate" or "companion." She also says, "Put a title on your story!" That's why our class is made up of good writers!